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Finding a Princess

Jessie Romeril
Year 5 Le Rondin School

We're going on a Princess hunt. We're going to catch a beautiful one. What a snowy day. We are so cold!

Oh wow! Fields of flowers. We can't go over it. We can't go under it. Oh no, we've got to go through it. Sniffy, Sniffy!

Oh no, quick sand.We can't go under it and we can't go through it. I've got to use a fast jet pack to go over it swoosh.swoosh!

Oh no, a swarm of bees. I can't go under it and I can't go over it. I'll have to go through it on my fast motor bike. Vroom! Vroom!

Oh no! A herd of elephants. I can't go under it. I can't go through it. I've got to leap over it. Stomp! Stomp!

Oh no! A mangrove swamp. We can't go under it and we can't go through it. We've got to go over on our magic carpet. Broom! Broom!

Oh no, a wardrobe. I can't go over it and I can't go under it. I have got to go into it. Creak! Creak!

Oh look in the dark. A yellow dress. White gloves. And a sparkly tiara. It's a princess!

Quick back out of the wardrobe.

Quick, back through the elephants. Stomp, Stomp!

Quick back through the bees. Vroom! Vroom!

Quick back through the quicksand. Swoosh! swoosh!

Quick back through the field of flowers. Sniffy! Sniffy!

Quick through the castle gates. Quick into the elevator and up the turret.

Hide behind the boxes in the wardrobe.

Oh no we left the gates open!

Quick back down the elevator. Shut the gates. Back up the elevator and up to the turret. Into the wardrobe. Hide under the boxes.

Phew! We will never go on a princess hunt again.

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