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The Murder Party

Riley Guilbert
Year 5 Les Voies School

One day it was my friend's birthday. His name is David Quackerson but an imposter arrived at his party…it was the Plague Doctor

He came stomping in dressed in a black cloak and a crow mask and a top hat with some infected rats! “Oh no” I said “We need to get out of here!”

“Hahaha!” said the Plague Doctor “You are coming with me!” He grabbed me by my wrist and he was really strong.

“Get off me!” I screamed.

I kicked and shouted to escape. The Plague Doctor got one of his rats out and it scuttled across the floor and ran all the way up David’s body and bit him on his hand.

“Oh no!” “I feel toxic!” “Oh God!!” he screamed in pain and panic and he shook the rat off his hand. It flew across the room, bounced off the wall back towards David. David kicked the rat and stamped on it. The Plague Doctor screamed in rage.

David suddenly remembered that he had been given a powerful magic LED mask by me. He ran to his pile of presents. He put the LED mask on and pressed the button to turn the lights on. The Plague Doctor was still holding on to me tightly. David turned his head towards us and the full beam of the LED mask shone on the Plague Doctor and his toxic rats. The plague doctor and his rats could not survive bright lights.

“Ooooooooooo No!” said the Plague Doctor “What's this?”

“My LED mask and it is so powerful it will make you and your horrible toxic rats disappear forever! ”

The Plague Doctor and his toxic rats disappeared in a puff of toxic smoke.

David and I were very happy and carried on with his birthday party.

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